Reviews For A Night Of Despair

Name: Katara (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2017 07:07 am · For: Chapter 1

Ooooohhh nice one! I like the twists. really, it doesn't matter about the change with Legolas being raped but surviving.

Name: pennie (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2014 08:13 pm · For: Chapter 1

Pleae a sequel!! Haldir's got to be the one, or Aragorn when he realizes what he did and finally opens his heart to Legolas (he just met Arwen before, but Legolas is his real love :D)

Name: minnie (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2013 05:22 am · For: Chapter 1

This story will always be special to me, I'm SO GLAD you still write. You're great at it!! Where's this story's sequel?

Name: Lumiel Alatar (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2013 05:25 pm · For: Chapter 1

I liked it so much, very creative!
Great job.

Name: Melodie_Gael (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2013 06:24 am · For: Chapter 1

Well..that was a good one! Really really dark but definitely well written! And elves are supposed to die when they're raped?really? poor thingy:/ Thumbs up for a sequel!

Name: A Witch defiant (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2013 01:38 pm · For: Chapter 1

First off, I am so happy to have found the library of Moiria still going after all these years! second...boy that was dark. Really really good, but so dark. Well done!

Name: Gimli (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2013 07:29 pm · For: Chapter 1

But what happened to me? I wish there was more on the others.
But a great story that I enjoyed.

Name: Mono (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 05:04 am · For: Chapter 1

Great story! Very heartfelt! Have you considered a sequel? i would love to read about the healing-process with Haldir at his side, and the meeting of the humans once more when they are 'right' again!

Name: Elwen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 12:53 am · For: Chapter 1

This was my first ever LOTR fanfiction and I think I made a good choice. Though there were a few minor flaws like modern expressions, I found this an all around fantasmical story. Keep it up!

Name: youtube anamoradeira1o (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2011 08:11 pm · For: Chapter 1

that was so sexy and amazing, this forced thing was great but that Leg felt pleasure in one point was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

Name: Romanse (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:53 pm · For: Chapter 1

I liked this story and was glad that Legolas did not die. 

There was some bold, graphic writing that brought the horror of Legolas' situation fully to life.  The comfort was good, but left me wanting just a bit more of it to be equal in intensity to the hurt.

 There were a few typos here and there, so a beta reader might be in order, but nothing too serious.

Lastly, I think this story would read even better if you try to eliminate using expressions or terms that are too modern-feeling if you know what I mean.

Good job on your story and thanks for sharing it here. 

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