Reviews For Anicroche

Name: sue cooke (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2014 02:21 am · For: Chapter 10

I have read the previous stories in this series. I enjoy your imagination with this whole story-line. But your poor command of English idiom is making me crazy. There are whole paragraphs that make no sense. I do hope you keep writing and find some beta help that has English as a primary language. Its a shame that your talent is facing an uphill battle against your language skills

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