Reviews For Battle's Poison

Name: Katrina (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2014 02:06 am · For: Chapter ??

I love it can you please do more of Legolas and Thranduil as they are my two favourite elves. 9 as it was to short.

Name: Rachel (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2014 04:51 pm · For: Chapter ??

Hi there! I don't know how you had this idea of writing this but I must say fur me it did not make sense to me. But your style and language is perfect. I just wanted to ask how could you write this when he is not a character with this characteristics? It's just a question.

Name: loves thranduil (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2013 01:02 pm · For: Chapter ??

I read it over like 3 times before i got who was saying what in the end. It was good...

Name: Dora (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 10:07 am · For: Epilogue

Dear Celebrant Peredhil,very impressive article!I'd like to translate it into Chinese if that is OK with you.I'll credit you fully and post the
Thank you very much!
Dora from China.

Name: Nerwen (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 08:41 pm · For: Chapter ??

Not bad, although it was a little predictable it was still very sweet, I could of stood for a few surprises but nevertheless it was a good read, hope to see some more titles from you. On the constructive criticism side I believe your short and to the point approach was not the best approach, it would have been much better if you took the time to develop the story a little bit instead of jumping in right away, it started with a battle where Thranduil was injured, but what battle? How was Thranduil hurt? What were his injuries? Developmentally the story lacked so it left the readers with a lot of questions and it was too fast so it was a little hard to follow. However still it was sweet and I do hope to see more from you still.


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2008 02:45 pm · For: Chapter ??

Overall not to bad of a story, just kind of hard to follow.

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