Name: Talullah (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2015 04:46 am · For: Chapter 1

This was amazing! It's perfect in itself, but ooh, please do expand! I love how vividly visual it is and how the POV switches from the first to the second stanza and how it feels musical. Lovely, lovely work.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Talullah! I'm really glad you like it!

Expanding it would need more world-building than I can manage at the moment, but I think it's a very interesting period, worth exploring!

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