Reviews For The Second Path

Name: Harmonia (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2011 02:35 pm · For: Chapter 1

Well, « Russandol » means « copper-top ». His mother-name « Maitimo » means « well-shaped one ».

In your chapter 5, when Elrond call him « Russandol », it seems to means « well-shaped », isn't it ? I think Maedhros had always auburn hair.

Thanks for your story, it is great !


Name: Undomiel (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2008 01:14 am · For: Chapter 1

I don't like Silmarillion much but this story has a great feel to it. Off to read Chapter 2.


Name: lovelegollas (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 03:46 am · For: Chapter 1

'A stubborn Maglor was worse than a stubborn Feanor' nice line! It shows the character of Feanorians so well. And even in the Heat from the ashes, your Maedhros is a sensitive person. Different viewpoint than usual. 

 

And I enjoyed the scene where Fingon plays the peeping tom. Once more you have shown your skill in making a embarassing situation touching.

 

Looking forward to next chapters. 




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