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Wow, great story concept! I'm just tearing through it. You do need a new beta though. It is obvious neither of you have English as a first language. I can make the corrections in my head though, and there are only a few places tyhat I can't figure out what you mean. I really am enjoying this. Don't stop writing, you have a talent or storytelling... the rest is just technical.
You are a very good story teller. The suspense was riviting and the characters came to life. However, you obviously have English as a second language. That is not a bad thing, I certainly could not write creatively in another language. You should, though, get a Beta reader that is a native English speaker. They would have corrected all the grammar and vocabulary errors that made reading the story a bit jarring. I do hope you keep writing. You have a creative gift.
So amazing! If you made a sequel I'd die happy!!!
How do I start???????????
You made me cry, laugh...18 chapters of pure Middle Earth's goodness!!!
Thank you so much for doing this, it's so recent that I can't believe I didn't find this story yet. Nice work!!
So romantic, scarry and you are really GOOD with angst, I felt so much for poor Legolas. I don't like this couple but YOU made it work!!
Loved it!!!
I loved it
