Name: Sue (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2017 09:06 am · For: Chapter 1

WTF! This isn't complete by a long shot.  What is the odd segue about Thranduil about?  Is it LINDIR who is crazy, screaming, dreaming.  Makes no sense, not spooky, just unfinished.

Name: spinster (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2015 01:33 pm · For: Chapter 1

Completed???? NOT! You left me hanging.  Write MORE.  I know it's been 4 years, but really.  What is going on with Elros?  Bargain?  Sactifice?!?  And Thranduil; why is  he in Imladris?  Is he going to try to seduce Lindir? Is he part of this bargain/sacrifice mystery?  Why are all the elves (except Glorfiindel) dark haired.  And where is the spookiness?  Get going girlfriend - there is SO much more to this story!

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