Reviews For Dragon's Lair

Name: spinster (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 03:51 pm · For: Chapter 1

First - FINISH IT!  Second  1 league = 3 miles; no way does a cavern extend visibly for hundreds (X3) of miles.   This is a novel idea though, so get those muses working.

Author's Response: HA! Oh my...well I shall try and oh huh...I'll have to actually re-examine what I wrote because I don't remember what I said lol. I shall have to look into what inspired them for this story and hopefully work on it soon! Thanks for the review!

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