Reviews For Heaven

Name: spinster (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2016 09:37 pm · For: Chapter 1

I liked the story. You did a good job of keeping the suspense of who died right to the end.  It is unfortuneate that you chose to punctuate the story with really bad poetry.  I realize that it is probably some song lyric, but not everyone listens to the same music and what might sound great in a song just falls flat as a poetic interlude.




Name: Azurena (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2014 11:00 pm · For: Chapter 1

Sequel. Please. Sequel please. My heart is broken. I know I already sent you a private message but I'm feeling really intensely about this. A reunion fic would be so wonderful. I hope you consider it (and the only reason I gave you a 9 instead of 10 is because my heart was torn to pieces, but I loved it anyway bc I was really feeling the love between them)


Name: Candy (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2014 01:47 am · For: Chapter 1

It's beautiful. So heartbreakingly beautiful.
It broke my heart completely seeing one of them left behind like that. My heart was literally clenching upon reading each word. And of course I bursted into tears at last.

Thank you so much for this story, it's beautiful.


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