Name: Elena A. (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2013 07:11 pm · For: PART FOUR.

Oh my what a story.
I think you described both Frodo and Sam very well. I really felt for them. I'm glad that in your story, Frodo did find healing in the end.

My only comment would be that I think you should use less of the 'I love you, its alright, I've got you' speeches. But I enjoyed this very much. It was easy to read and the intimate moments were described as tender and loving.

Thank you for your story!

Name: JPA (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2013 04:56 am · For: PART FOUR.

Like the prequel, this kept me up entranced, two nights straight. Together they're a wonderful depiction of guilt, shame, coming out and how it should be. Please do write and post more, though Frodo and Sam are complete x

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